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Talvir

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Isn't English forbidden? Hoping not, so appreciate my first poem:

The Curse

Am I happy? Yes, I am!
I've got everything I aim!
So, of course, I also have
Some more wishes, hopes to claim!
Doesn't matter, but I might
I remember still that night:
See was kind and I was blind
To everything, that came to mind,
The only, I could find around,
Was the deep-deep sky, the sight
Of waves and stars, so close and bright.

Suddenly, a friend of mine
Recognized a special sign,
Told me, that I had a chance
To obtain my happiness,
That I had to make a wish
To come true-ask golden fish!

My head was empty, I was full,
At once I felt, that she was cruel...
'I've got everything,I claimed,
I'm giving it to you, my friend!..'
She refused-it wasn't her,
Though she really wanted more.
Then I said,'I'll leave it here,
To the shore, which is so dear!'

Don't believe me! I've told lie!
As you see, I'm not so high!
Clear free energy's so rare,
And I couldn't stand and stare!
Maybe, baby, it's my curse-
I have sent to Universe!..

               

               

Feanor

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Lady_LOVE

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Цитата:
Ох, Леди... С вас прям хоть учебник по клинической графомании писать, чесслово...

Пиши, кто ж тебе не даёт! :D :P

               

               

Brok

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Для первой пробы пера... очень даже ничего,... но могло бы быть и лучше...